Week Without Walls
I wrote this story about my field trip for a week with my school where we did a bunch of fun activities.
When we arrived at the camp it wasn’t what I expected it to look like I was expecting wooden cabins and a view of the beach. But that wasn’t really what it was I don’t know what the cabins were made of but they definitely weren’t wooden and the inside of the cabins looked like a jail where there was only space to sleep. Everyone’s cabins were the same and there wasn’t any homey feeling to the place I got a cold shiver ran through my body when I walked through. But I ignored it and just went on I thought it was just because I was alone without my parents in a different country for the first time, but when we went to have lunch I changed my mind a man called Mustafa came up to me and told me to run while I could but I just thought he was joking since a constant joke ran through the camp about a ghost man but still it was so believable I couldn’t help but wonder. That night I had gotten up for a drink of water when I herd the trainers saying they were going to take us out in to the middle of the desert were no one could hear us scream but Gucci and Mustafa were against this plan they said they should just wait for the next group of kids to do it. But the others objected and said there might not be another group of kids because last month an investigator came saying that a group of 50 dead bodies were found a couple miles away from here. I didn’t know what to do I didn’t know who to tell I didn’t even know what they were talking about but I knew it wasn’t good if 50 bodies were found not to far away from their camp. I had decided I would confront Gucci and Mustafa they seemed to be good people but when I did they denied the conversation ever happened and said I needed to get more sleep. But I knew what I herd and I wasn’t going to let anyone go on any hike into the desert without a teacher from school, but how could I stop this from happening I mean there wasn’t really anything I could do not alone so I went and told my cabin buddies they didn’t believe me either they said I was just paranoid. But I knew the trainers were going to take us in to the woods and let the bears eat us and there was nothing I could do to stop it. But that day when they said they were going to take us for a walk in the desert at mid night I knew what to do I wasn’t going to go on the walk instead I would call the police and let them deal with it. But when I had told the trainers I didn’t want to go Mustafa and Gucci came up to me and told me they were only going to scare us with the goat man story and when I asked them about the 50 bodies they said they had seen me leave my cabin and just wanted to scare me a little.
Mr.R Said:
on February 18, 2008 at 9:25 am
Is this meant to be one paragraph? Why didn’t you mention the Sci-Fi elements in your intro? Is there any sci-fi in your story?